Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Barefoot Heart

Comes a time 
a wintery time
between summers 
when my 
earth widened  
sun browned 
barefoot heart
has to squish 
expansive parts
unwillingly
back inside
uncomfortable 
tight spots 

constrained by 
framed by 
culture

no air cleansing 
no water cooling 
no sand tickling 
earthiness

no circles
only rows

no love feasts warm
celebrating at the table 
of friends
only
clacking plastic  
grating against shiny
metal holes passed somber 
with 
baskets of crumbs
dead and dry and tasteless


unable to breathe 
or wriggle free
monstrous waves 
of panting panic

attack 

until ties are loosened 
buckles unfastened
restraints kicked 
off and away toward 
the preferred 
expanse 
of summertime's
intended 
green  
freedom
where 
no blisters rub
my barefoot heart

raw



Maureen encouraged me to join in the fun happening over at One Stop Poetry's One Shot Wednesday. Even though I feel quite shy about it, playing with others and learning from them is good. Poetry only recently found me. I'm most thankful. 

24 comments:

  1. This deserves several readings, Kathleen. Such a strong image: "my barefoot heart/raw".

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  2. "no circles, only rows"

    oh, that. that.

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  3. i had to read this several times
    because i like it

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  4. no need to be shy...you write wonderfully...and paint the image well...and i like barefeet to boot...smiles. nice one shot!

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  5. I would say this poem is a great reflection of poetry. Poetry can be a place where we express and run barefoot with our words.

    I'm loving your poetry Kathleen

    Moon Smiles

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  6. And I'm glad that Maureen encouraged you. You described here what all of us go through -- from panic and constriction to resolution. Nice one, Kathleen.

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  7. A reminder of summer freedom and carefree without restriction or panic... great visuals throughout the lines.

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  8. This has a bursting out feeling to it--like why be constrained by a pair of old jeans that now needs to be a size or two larger (metaphorically speaking, of course!)

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  9. I'm so glad you are writing poetry and I'm even happier you've shared. The pacing of this is wonderful, the images clear and sharp. It's always sad to me in the autumn when I have to put shoes and socks back on...the freedom of summer seems so temporary. Maybe that's why it's so beautiful.

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  10. Green Freedom... Like it.
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya

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  11. well said :) I like the power in the verse here.. deserves several readings, like Maureen says..!

    My 1 Shot

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  12. Love bare feet - hate blisters.

    Nice one, Kathleen!

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  13. I think this would make a fine performance piece. Spoken word, like the flow. Thanks for sharing your talent.

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  14. barefoot heart - sounds so exposed. Great One Shot. These are all so fun to read. My One Shot is HERE.

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  15. Feels like childhood and yet there's that barefoot heart...moving in to broken hearts of teen years. Elvis somewhere playing in a parked convertible. Thanks. Gay (@beachanny)

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  16. What a beautiful image you've painted...intended
    green
    freedom
    where
    no blisters rub
    my barefoot heart - fabulous!

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  17. ..no circles - only rows…love this - alone this few words say so much!

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  18. this was a wonderful poem..and i love the freedom of bare feet...thanks for sharing with one shot...cheers pete

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  19. I like the basket full of crumbs. What a poetic way to describe lack.

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  20. I love the contrast of summer and winter. Awesome one shot post. :)
    _joe

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  21. Makes me want to run barefoot backwards toward the summer months instead of on dry crunchy leaves and a cold ground. Lovely poem,
    Cheers,
    Joanny

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