tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post4438006486436092681..comments2023-03-19T04:24:05.231-07:00Comments on Neoteny: Barefoot HeartKathleen Overbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12684519598333961438noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-17597007933490620892010-09-22T05:54:00.452-07:002010-09-22T05:54:00.452-07:00Makes me want to run barefoot backwards toward the...Makes me want to run barefoot backwards toward the summer months instead of on dry crunchy leaves and a cold ground. Lovely poem,<br />Cheers,<br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-58895547767334425352010-09-21T13:00:07.254-07:002010-09-21T13:00:07.254-07:00I love the contrast of summer and winter. Awesome ...I love the contrast of summer and winter. Awesome one shot post. :)<br />_joeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-41138958834837036222010-09-19T05:17:44.277-07:002010-09-19T05:17:44.277-07:00I like the basket full of crumbs. What a poetic wa...I like the basket full of crumbs. What a poetic way to describe lack.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-71886321862999020482010-09-16T12:06:56.511-07:002010-09-16T12:06:56.511-07:00this was a wonderful poem..and i love the freedom ...this was a wonderful poem..and i love the freedom of bare feet...thanks for sharing with one shot...cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-38589902056153577662010-09-16T11:38:06.793-07:002010-09-16T11:38:06.793-07:00..no circles - only rows…love this - alone this fe.....no circles - only rows…love this - alone this few words say so much!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-24126463417771671612010-09-16T06:49:58.772-07:002010-09-16T06:49:58.772-07:00What a beautiful image you've painted...intend...What a beautiful image you've painted...intended <br />green <br />freedom<br />where <br />no blisters rub<br />my barefoot heart - fabulous!SuziCatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04025931724313344438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-38352921861499539072010-09-15T19:49:24.165-07:002010-09-15T19:49:24.165-07:00great one!great one!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-26411722758778524572010-09-15T14:53:04.154-07:002010-09-15T14:53:04.154-07:00Feels like childhood and yet there's that bare...Feels like childhood and yet there's that barefoot heart...moving in to broken hearts of teen years. Elvis somewhere playing in a parked convertible. Thanks. Gay (@beachanny)Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-72340849020710117422010-09-15T14:21:01.313-07:002010-09-15T14:21:01.313-07:00Beautiful imagery!Beautiful imagery!Karen Barnetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02703281875863530888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-86180121862212187672010-09-15T14:16:36.688-07:002010-09-15T14:16:36.688-07:00barefoot heart - sounds so exposed. Great One Shot...barefoot heart - sounds so exposed. Great One Shot. These are all so fun to read. My One Shot is <a href="http://petzoldspracticalprose.blogspot.com/2010/09/one-shot-tracks.html" rel="nofollow">HERE</a>.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-47121812355118948952010-09-15T14:09:01.589-07:002010-09-15T14:09:01.589-07:00Nicely Done!Nicely Done!Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-78915366412399724422010-09-15T13:18:07.127-07:002010-09-15T13:18:07.127-07:00I think this would make a fine performance piece. ...I think this would make a fine performance piece. Spoken word, like the flow. Thanks for sharing your talent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-8680705394574086162010-09-15T10:58:54.799-07:002010-09-15T10:58:54.799-07:00Love bare feet - hate blisters.
Nice one, Kathlee...Love bare feet - hate blisters.<br /><br />Nice one, Kathleen!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-37243425616258431112010-09-15T10:43:21.904-07:002010-09-15T10:43:21.904-07:00well said :) I like the power in the verse here.. ...well said :) I like the power in the verse here.. deserves several readings, like Maureen says..!<br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/09/14/in-your-dreams/" rel="nofollow">My 1 Shot</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-52553519163295541762010-09-15T08:35:29.226-07:002010-09-15T08:35:29.226-07:00Green Freedom... Like it.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shi...Green Freedom... Like it.<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-36190870753825843732010-09-15T07:50:17.403-07:002010-09-15T07:50:17.403-07:00I'm so glad you are writing poetry and I'm...I'm so glad you are writing poetry and I'm even happier you've shared. The pacing of this is wonderful, the images clear and sharp. It's always sad to me in the autumn when I have to put shoes and socks back on...the freedom of summer seems so temporary. Maybe that's why it's so beautiful.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-37319302658032819452010-09-14T21:48:47.700-07:002010-09-14T21:48:47.700-07:00This has a bursting out feeling to it--like why be...This has a bursting out feeling to it--like why be constrained by a pair of old jeans that now needs to be a size or two larger (metaphorically speaking, of course!)Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-21670250907985469582010-09-14T20:46:48.990-07:002010-09-14T20:46:48.990-07:00A reminder of summer freedom and carefree without ...A reminder of summer freedom and carefree without restriction or panic... great visuals throughout the lines.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-7094673002586758682010-09-14T19:27:21.354-07:002010-09-14T19:27:21.354-07:00And I'm glad that Maureen encouraged you. You ...And I'm glad that Maureen encouraged you. You described here what all of us go through -- from panic and constriction to resolution. Nice one, Kathleen.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-15489433417136965002010-09-14T18:39:21.375-07:002010-09-14T18:39:21.375-07:00I would say this poem is a great reflection of poe...I would say this poem is a great reflection of poetry. Poetry can be a place where we express and run barefoot with our words.<br /><br />I'm loving your poetry Kathleen<br /><br />Moon Smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-56855385591095318632010-09-14T18:14:27.291-07:002010-09-14T18:14:27.291-07:00no need to be shy...you write wonderfully...and pa...no need to be shy...you write wonderfully...and paint the image well...and i like barefeet to boot...smiles. nice one shot!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-62943417858303303042010-09-14T16:20:58.609-07:002010-09-14T16:20:58.609-07:00i had to read this several times
because i like it...i had to read this several times<br />because i like itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-17179781951909022252010-09-14T14:28:04.757-07:002010-09-14T14:28:04.757-07:00"no circles, only rows"
oh, that. that...."no circles, only rows"<br /><br />oh, that. that.L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7623052362504592935.post-20083120312661330192010-09-14T11:17:14.697-07:002010-09-14T11:17:14.697-07:00This deserves several readings, Kathleen. Such a s...This deserves several readings, Kathleen. Such a strong image: "my barefoot heart/raw".Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.com